Saturday, January 19, 2019

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom


Year's first snow fall


prediction of early spring--


sakura buds





初雪に早春の予感 ... さくらの蕾



--R K Singh

Courtesy:    https://cosmostanka.blogspot.com/  



Rika Inami I’m sorry. I retranslated your haiku. Could you please correct your post at Japanese Poetry Garden?

初雪や早春感ずる桜の芽

“芽” is better and the total is natural.
In Japanese , your haiku is 5-8-5. Only one is jiamari.
I already corrected it at my blog.
I apologize to you.🙏🏻

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