Cherry Blossom
Cherry Blossom
Year's first snow fall
prediction of early spring--
sakura buds
初雪に早春の予感 ... さくらの蕾
--R K Singh
Courtesy:
https://cosmostanka.blogspot.com/
Rika Inami I’m sorry. I retranslated your haiku. Could you please correct your post at Japanese Poetry Garden?
初雪や早春感ずる桜の芽
“芽” is better and the total is natural.
In Japanese , your haiku is 5-8-5. Only one is jiamari.
I already corrected it at my blog.
I apologize to you.🙏🏻
初雪や早春感ずる桜の芽
“芽” is better and the total is natural.
In Japanese , your haiku is 5-8-5. Only one is jiamari.
I already corrected it at my blog.
I apologize to you.🙏🏻
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