My haiku on Poetry Pea podcast--Episode 49

Poetry Pea 

Week 49: Pain

 http://poetrypea.com/week-49-pain/ 

"Professor R K Singh, also writing for us from India:

unable to map
on the face where her pain ends
and mine begins

I think the metaphor works really well in this work, don’t you?

wiping his face
under the umbrella
an old man with books

L3 is a marvel for me. Professor Singh could have just said “an old man” but the addition of books adds just a little bit more depth. What do you think?"